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Pretending is all it ever is
A lie, a smile, another slit wrist
Your dreams are fake too
Everything pretended for you
Make believe as peter pan
Make believe and prove you can
Can believe in something else
Can forget you live in this hell
A masquerade, a formal ball
You know its lies, nothing more
I’ll smile still and pretend
I’ll smile for you until the end

Can you save me
From the doom you lay
Across my chest
Impending hatred
A blood stained tear
Falls to your hand
You wipe it away
It’s too late
You’ll never care
You’re never there
I love you still
But this is done
I can’t keep pretending
I can’t do it hun

I see you
I hear you
I feel you
I HATE YOU!!
What can I do?!
©2006-2009 ~suicidalbuby
:iconsuicidalbuby:

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three poems put together thats why they don't flow into each other... but thats the way i wanted it to be, dysfunctional like the topic. tell me what you think ^^

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Wow, you go from prettending and quickly progress to finally showing your true feelings. That is deep. Even though they don't flow together, there is definitely a poetic progression.

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Shucks, I'm no real poet.
All's well that ends.
:iconsuicidalbuby:
the gaps between the poems are juts, and the progression is like denial, hiding feelings then to an aggressive outburst at the end... it made sense in my head somehow. heh :D thanks for the fave

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I live to Die and Die to be born into The Night
~xxx~Danielle Hale~xxx~
:frog:

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